My narrative writing

Slowly, a foot moved, then the trunk, then a loud growl shook the icy ground and cracked the shimmery ice and it cracked into one million pieces. A big ball of shimmering ice came racing down towards the mammoth. The mammoth blocked it  and the shimmering ball of  ice made an avalanche. It came roaring down the mountain and hit the sea which made the mammoth fall into the water. After a while, the mammoth was frozen in ice.

Then someone went with a hair dryer to try and melt the ice, not much of the mammoth got free because it was taking a long time it took about 9 days for it to be finished. They used a ladder to reach the top of the mammoth. This is a true story!!

Holidays

In the holiday's i went to  Hasan's shop for a play date. At the play date we went to the park, we were going to go to the skate park but it was to croweded. we had some chocolate and a bottle of fizzy! yummm.  and we also watched regular show on tv witch was fun as well. and then we went to the park again to play soccer and tag. then it was getting dark so we 

went back to the shop and played on the ipad. Then i went back home. and when i got home  just befor they left  i gave hasan a pokeme card to keep
                                               
the  end!!!