This is all about me!

Pupil	Success Criteria Explanation Writing	Partner
	I have used a general statement to introduce the topic.
	My writing explains how one thing leads to another.
	I have used the present tense
	I have written in time order (When…First…Then…After…Finally)
	I have used causal connectives ( So…If…This causes…This makes…therefore …)
	I have written in third person (I haven’t used the word ‘YOU’)
What I am proud of in my writing today: that i've done my best and did the most writing i could and explained the most i could.
What I can do to improve my writing next time: try to use les of the word you because i want to wright a good third person story!!

how to use the time traveller 2000,000!!

welcome to the time traveller 200,000 im going to show the user how to use this time machine yes i know the user probably knows how to use it but i’m going to show the user all the other cool features that this time machine has like safety and also dangerous things that could happen.

time traveller how to.

SAFETY: never use if the user is using an electronic device, unless its a camera if using any other device, that device will interfere with the wires and cables inside the time traveller 200,000. 2: if under 11 do not use because children under the age of 11 are probably silly and will mess everything up.

DANGER: The user must make sure they have the right date and time for where the user wants to go or the user will end up someplace completely different and maybe dangerous if they are not careful.

LAST TOUCHES: This is how the user uses The Time Traveler 200000 All the user  needs to do is sit inside then enjoy the ride.

wolcome to 2018

As part of our blogging lesson mrs. Spragg is helping us learn how to post and why we should post .

This is a test to see who is reading my blog. Can you please comment for me to see who is reading? 

I cant wait to read your comments.

there is a boy in the girls bathroom word art

                                          this is a word art about the book called theres a boy in the girls bathroom

                                          i definittly reccomend this book because its really funny and interestng!!

my Autumn poem! (even know it is'nt Autumn)

Autumn is coming in March

Umbrellas are out under the trees as the leaves are falling

Tangoing kids under trees

Under the sun and moon the leaves fall

Moonlight we are asleep in our warm beds

Now the rakes are out

braille words

Code  cracking        Braille

.    .

.. .    means hi

  .

..    .

.. .     means go

. .     .

.   .   .

. .     .  means pop

Eamon raining diamonds

It blazed across the sky like a shooting star, lighting up the countryside for miles around, trailing behind it a tail of brilliant blue light. People gazed nervously out of their bedroom windows, marveling
# at the beautiful and mysterious object… people were starting to come out but the first one out was a boy and he was the luckiest one he was able to see you guessed it well maybe not it was a diamond falling straight through the sky and it landed skidding across the grass the dark green grass. The diamond it glimmer's like the brightest light in the whole entire world it nearly blinded him he had to look away for a minute. The tree that was near it fell over. The diamond was dark purple it looked so pretty and beautiful. As more and more people came outside there were hundreds of surprised faces. And more and more and even MORE diamonds fell from the sky it was the best sight in the whole entire world it was amazing. But one person was a scientist he grabbed a forklift then bring it to his laboratory and studied it for a while and it had a virus in it called moctios cotis but then it killed everyone the end. ;)