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Wednesday, May 24, 2017

My narrative writing

Slowly, a foot moved, then the trunk, then a loud growl shook the icy ground and cracked the shimmery ice and it cracked into one million pieces. A big ball of shimmering ice came racing down towards the mammoth. The mammoth blocked it  and the shimmering ball of  ice made an avalanche. It came roaring down the mountain and hit the sea which made the mammoth fall into the water. After a while, the mammoth was frozen in ice.

Then someone went with a hair dryer to try and melt the ice, not much of the mammoth got free because it was taking a long time it took about 9 days for it to be finished. They used a ladder to reach the top of the mammoth. This is a true story!!

1 comment:

  1. Wow Eamon! What amazing words you are using in your writing. I wonder whether Mammoths ever lived in Christchurch?!

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