my narrative work

Hi guys im back today with another post and I have one of my favourite narratives here for you and it is about my last ever soccer game, it is when I scored my last ever goal and won to under twelve's. So I had a lot of fun playing the last game I would play there, so I usually play around 3:45 till 4:45 and I always play at home even though its not a real game, but I just like practising a lot just in case I start to play again some other time at CFC, (the club I played for.)

But what I found hard when writing the narrative was trying to remember all the details about the game how we all felt and everything we did and how much fun I had there. It was also hard to try and figure out what order to put the game in because there was just so much going on at the CFC academy.

And what I have improved on while writing the narrative is I really improved on remembering to put in paragraphs and I really needed to improve punctuation, so I remembered to put some more of that in.  So now you get to read it! 

It was my last ever soccer game last month and I was in the under tens team (so for 9 and ten-year-olds) so I was one of the best people in my team, and my coaches name was mike and he was a really good coach and he taught all of us the basics and some cool tricks so that was fun. I played at CFC Christchurch football academy and I also loved playing there.

So when I was playing there we had to vs the under 12’s and we were all very sure we would lose but we went onto the field and we played ball but then will we were playing one other person from the other team was yellow carded for kicking someone's leg on purpose, so he tried to get away with an excuse but they were not buying it because the boy whose leg was kicked was on the ground cradling his leg.

And so then within moments, the game was eventually back on we had the ball in hand “or, in foot!” so we kept going but the opponent's team took the ball! And they went across the field all the way through and they went straight to the goal our goalie was ready and strike went the ball as it zoomed straight into the goal. So that was one nil to the opponent's team, and we weren't surprised they scored. Then something extraordinary happened,

The goalie passed me the ball and I ran up the field without stopping and then strike! I scored! I couldn't believe it so now the scores were tied!  My team needed one more goal in ten minutes to win so we gave the other team’s goalie the ball and we were off the game is real now not just fun and games, we had to win we had too! So the goalie passed the ball and I took the ball off the player when they were halfway down the field and I dashed over to the goal I shot and it was saved, but I wasn't gonna give up yet.

So they passed the ball again and they were nearly at the goal but then I swooped in got the ball and strike!! I closed my eyes after kicking and hoped for the best and then everyone started yelling YAY GOOD SHOT so then I knew we had won I was so happy that I got the goal that I just ran across the field in shock and joy.

And then the game was over and we won to the under 12’s

THE END