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Friday, May 11, 2018

non chronological report

my bag report (non chronological)
This is a bag for camping for long amouts of times or even just one night.
Features
This bag has specail features like water proof for if your going for a walk and your bag falls of nothing
inside will be damp and it is indistructable.


trialing
There were 24 people around the world to trial the bag but they did not go camping they went for a walk
around the block so all the people went to the block and they fell stumbled in puddles and nothing
happened to the bag it was inustructable!


Look it was a bag designied to look good aswell so when you wen in public it would look good and be really
comptarble.


Matierial the bag is made of really nice and srtrong leather and on top it was coated witjh water proof cotton
for landing if you fall so nothing breaks eather.
Cost it will be near nine/eleven dollars for the shoe because of the features and protection.


This all together is called the campomatic 20,000 and is really good probalbly the best camping bag in the
world because who would ever recreate a bag as good as this not to brag or anything like that though.

This bag is a 100/100
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this is my non chronological report about my one of a kind bag
. i have been learning how to right a non chron (non chronological) report
. i have learnt that non chron is a made up story like fairy tales
.i found that i strugle with remembering to end with a conclusion and wrighting in third person.

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